Sunday, August 3, 2008

What would you do if I wrote out of boredom.....


Jet City Woman.


So here we are, all teenage angst and confusion, except, these are not teenagers. They are adults with a teenage hangover.
It all begins as the narrator, also the protagonist, meets an old girlfriend of his at an art exhibition. Naina, as we are told her name, carries a certain mystery about her since the time of college days. The unexpected meeting sets our protagonist off on a trip down the memory lanes of good old college days. Those were the days of attending parties, late night drives on the bike and general lazing around in Delhi’s by lanes. He muses on how he met Naina and the circumstances which led them to date each other. She is beautiful, intelligent, wild and mysterious. She refuses to discuss about her past and her family. She goes out of his life as suddenly as she had come in. From that time onwards, the protagonist cannot really get him out of his mind. She is always there at the back of his mind. He meets her in the art exhibition while covering the event. She’s a very popular journalist. This meeting gets her back into his life sporadically, but enough to trigger his interest and curiosity. He goes through a couple of jobs and his new job lets him travel. One day while returning back from a place he’d gone to review, his car breaks down and he inadvertently discovers Naina’s roots. His discovery leads him and us to understand her character better. At the end of the novel, Naina flies to London and takes up a job there and the protagonist moves back to his hometown to set up a restaurant and gets engaged to his girlfriend.
It's an interesting premise. Good storyline. Has all the requisites for a catchy read. A mysterious girl with a past, the life of students and what they face. The rise and fall of the dotcom boom is there in the background. Not too much, but just enough to make us understand its widespread hysteria. What lets the novel down is the narrative. It starts off well in the end, but meanders through pointlessly without any rhyme or reason. The way the protagonist discovers Naina’s past is too clichéd and something that Karan Johar would be proud to have in his movie. The character of Naina is not really etched properly and we fail to understand why the protagonist is obsessed with her. The ending gives an uncanny feeling that the author is looking for a sequel. It’s a good start to a first book, maybe the sequel will be better.

2 comments:

Smita said...

I agree with your review.

Finished this book few months back and found it an average book.

The author as you say meandered pointlessly at many points. In fact the protagonists visit to his hometown and the time spent there is pointless.

BTW lovely review :)

khare said...

hey! thanks :), I like your blog. It's very fresh :)